I Read A Short Story Today

Thursday, August 11, 2005

Helen Morrissey Rizzuto, "The River Woman"

After watching her mom kill the man who attacked her, Civette is placed in the care of an old Chinese healer/kaleidoscope maker and stops talking.

(from Ontario Review, Spring Summer 2005)

Sorry, just didn't buy it. I mean the scary, horrible parts were appropriately effective, but it's easy to scare and horrify me. I think I might've mentioned that before.
"The River Woman" is cliched a little bit in its moments and language, and a lot in its worldview. Whenever bad things happened, or supposedly sublime moments sprung awkwardly about, I said of course. This was like a made-for-TV arthouse flick, full of recognizeable parts and people and thinking. A good editor, even a shrewd copy editor, could have helped hide the strings a bit more, made it a little easier to get lost in it.

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