An American couple bickers on a tour stop in Ireland.

(from In/Vision)

Well, I didn’t much care for this story, but I don’t believe my going all negative on a young writer is going to do anybody any good, so I’m going to say three nice things:
1. The dialogue, of which there was plenty, was realistically rendered.
2. The description of the setting presented me with a clear mental picture.
3. The story did not choose a favorite among its bickering pro/antagonists.